Thursday, December 14, 2017
"Under a Soprano Sky" by Sonia Sanchez
My creative writing students have been working on integrating sound devices into their poetry. Sonia Sanchez (born Wilsonia Benita Driver) is a great example of a poet who creates rhythm with subtle sound devices. My personal favorite sound repetition in this poem occurs in the lines: "...I wooed the world/ with thumbs/ while yo-yos hummed." The repeated sounds in those lines are continued in the following lines as well. Artfully done.
Under a Soprano Sky
by Sonia Sanchez
once i lived on pillars in a green house
boarded by lilacs that rocked voices into weeds.
i bled an owl's blood
shredding the grass until i
rocked in a choir of worms.
obscene with hands, i wooed the world
with thumbs
while yo-yos hummed.
was it an unborn lacquer i peeled?
the woods, tall as waves, sang in mixed
tongues that loosened the scalp
and my bones wrapped in white dust
returned to echo in my thighs.
i hear a pulse wandering somewhere
on vague embankments.
O are my hands breathing? I cannot smell the nerves.
i saw the sun
ripening green stones for fields.
O have my eyes run down? i cannot taste my birth.
2.
now as i move, mouth quivering with silks
my skin runs soft with eyes.
descending into my legs, i follow obscure birds
purchasing orthopedic wings.
the air is late this summer.
i peel the spine and flood
the earth with adolescence.
O who will pump these breasts? I cannot waltz my tongue.
under a soprano sky, a woman sings,
lovely as chandeliers.
Read, listen, share, create, and be on watch.
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